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Then Sunny and Toy's robot go in to the fairyland ,when they go in there were two fairy meet and greet them.The two fairy are nice ,they gave Sunny some food andwater. After having food,they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy!And they go to a 1 hour fairyland ship place and the get on... 顯示更多 Then Sunny and Toy's robot go in to the fairyland ,when they go in there were two fairy meet and greet them.The two fairy are nice ,they gave Sunny some food and water. After having food,they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy! And they go to a 1 hour fairyland ship place and the get on the ship.When the ship on they were happy and excite ,because they will seen every thing they haven't seen it before .After this they went home ,and Sunny tell mom and dad all about the toy's robot and him what did they do all a day.But mom and dad unbelief him .Sunny didn't sad because he didn't lie.And they live together forever.
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I have corrected a bit of your writing. Then [the robot of Sunny and Toy] go [into] the fairyland, there were two [fairies that] meet and greet them.The two [fairies] are nice ,they gave Sunny some food and water. After having food, they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy! And they go to a fairyland [harbour for an hour] and the get on the ship.[On] the ship they were happy and [excited],because they [have] seen [things that] they haven't seen before .After [that,] they [go(?)] home ,and Sunny tell mom and dad all about [what] the toy's robot and him [do] [all day].But mom and dad [do not believe] him .Sunny [is not] sad because he [does not(?)] lie.And they live together forever. **** If you are telling a story that happened in the past, please use past tense. But if you are writing a book review, please use present tense through out the entire piece of writing.**** Hope that this will be useful!! ;)
Sunny Toy's Robot! (OK嗎?)後
發問:
Then Sunny and Toy's robot go in to the fairyland ,when they go in there were two fairy meet and greet them.The two fairy are nice ,they gave Sunny some food andwater. After having food,they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy!And they go to a 1 hour fairyland ship place and the get on... 顯示更多 Then Sunny and Toy's robot go in to the fairyland ,when they go in there were two fairy meet and greet them.The two fairy are nice ,they gave Sunny some food and water. After having food,they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy! And they go to a 1 hour fairyland ship place and the get on the ship.When the ship on they were happy and excite ,because they will seen every thing they haven't seen it before .After this they went home ,and Sunny tell mom and dad all about the toy's robot and him what did they do all a day.But mom and dad unbelief him .Sunny didn't sad because he didn't lie.And they live together forever.
最佳解答:
I have corrected a bit of your writing. Then [the robot of Sunny and Toy] go [into] the fairyland, there were two [fairies that] meet and greet them.The two [fairies] are nice ,they gave Sunny some food and water. After having food, they went to a merry-go-round,they were very very happy! And they go to a fairyland [harbour for an hour] and the get on the ship.[On] the ship they were happy and [excited],because they [have] seen [things that] they haven't seen before .After [that,] they [go(?)] home ,and Sunny tell mom and dad all about [what] the toy's robot and him [do] [all day].But mom and dad [do not believe] him .Sunny [is not] sad because he [does not(?)] lie.And they live together forever. **** If you are telling a story that happened in the past, please use past tense. But if you are writing a book review, please use present tense through out the entire piece of writing.**** Hope that this will be useful!! ;)
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